Where do we go from here, Major Tom?

A tiny love story from a night when the rain fell in Charlotte, NC, on a late June night in 2014.

At the Fillmore, musicians emerge from thick curtains and fingers pluck at strings and eyes turn upward and ears fill with rhythms and rhymes. Shafts of red and blue sneak from hidden banks, falling upon sweaty faces whispering of desires and regrets. Iโ€™d come for Ziggy Stardust and instead found her. She danced in a pool of emerald. A pert nose, dark eyes emerging from a mass of chocolate curls. We discovered โ€œModern Loveโ€ and she laughed and my heart leaped. I emerged, her number in my pocket and I sang of โ€œStarmanโ€ and life was good again.ย 

David Bowie’s “StarMan”

NOTE: The above work came from a writing prompt presented during a recentย Pen to Paper Liveย session hosted by theย Charlotte Lit organization. You can registerย here. In the session, presenter Paul Reali challenged us to write our very own tiny love story of less than 100 words. “They try to capture in a very small space something that is very important,” he said.

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Author: Michael Banks

I'm a freelance writer and editor and novelist who released my debut novel "Bend In The River" in September 2025. I'm also an award-winning journalist with over 30 years spent at newspapers in Kentucky, North Carolina and Mississippi.

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